i name a new perfume

this new perfume
called flaming ice
shards of scent
explore the senses
no melting star
this essence of excitement
that lingers softly
like whisperings
of night


4 thoughts on “i name a new perfume

  1. F. G. M.


    ce parfum
    de la Nuit

    “murmures de la nuit” / whisperings of night – that would be a great name for a new fragrance – you should contact French perfumers 🙂 I love your one-word first line, I love the whole poem!

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